哈尔滨市南岗区2021年二模英语答案「广州一模英语作文」

大家好，哈尔滨市南岗区2021年二模英语答案「广州一模英语作文」很多人还不知道，现在让我们一起来看看吧！

原题部分

六、书面表达(本题共20分)

假如你是李平，你的外教Peter爱好艺术，喜欢中国菜。他想在任教期满前再体验一次中国文化。请你根据以下信息给他写一封信，邀请他到你家过周末。

写作要点：

1. 欢迎他到你家度过本周末。

2. 你家周末打算进行的活动：

（1）用中国毛笔（Chinese brush）写字;

（2）全家一起包饺子。

3. 告诉他在中国如何成为一名懂礼仪的人。

写作要求：

1. 不得使用真实姓名和学校名。

2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。

3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。

4. 至少80词。

Dear Peter,

I’m Li Ping. I hear you’d like to experience some more Chinese cultures before going back.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Ping

答案部分

（以下范文是王老师亲自写的，转载请注明出处）

书面表达参考答案

Dear Peter,

I’m Li Ping. I hear you’d like to experience some more Chinese cultures before going back. Therefore, I am writing this letter to invite you in and spend the weekend with our family. I bet you would be interested in the activities that we have arranged for you. First, we will write some Chinese characters with traditional Chinese brushes. Different from pens, Chinese brushes are soft and this will be a new experience to you. Then, we will make dumplings together, because dumplings are considered as a typical Chinese cuisine.

As a foreigner, you must have noticed the big differences between your culture and Chinese culture. Thus, having some knowledge of Chinese social manners, especially table manners, is of vital importance. First, we do not call the names of the elderly directly. Instead, we always put “uncle”, “aunt” or other addresses before their names. This is a way to show our respect for them. Second, when we use chopsticks, we do not insert them into the rice, because this is impolite. More than often, we place them flat on the bowl.

That is all I want to say to you in this letter. I can’t wait to see you. Look forward to your reply.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Ping

讲评部分

对于本次作文来说，写出来不难，但写好很难。主要有两点：

1. 一定要注意连贯性。为了连贯性，我们甚至自己要添加进来一部分细节，这样行文才能更加流畅。

2. 关于“懂礼仪”这个其实很不好写。简单点的manners，难点的etiquette其实都不在同学们的掌握范围内。大多数同学会想到polite，但这个表达还不准确。就算同学们真的想到了manners，很可能还会遇到不知道说啥，更不知道怎么扩展。

同时，对于本次出题，我也保留我自己的一点想法。那就是希望出题人再严谨一些。因为要点三那句话，会给人一种“这个老外不懂礼仪，需要我一个学生来教他”的感觉。因为他不懂礼仪，所以才需要我们信件里教他礼仪。这很不好。我们应该范围再限制些，变成“如何成为一并懂中国餐桌礼仪的人”或类似的其他限定就顺畅了。老外只是不懂中国的特定礼仪，又不是不懂基本礼仪。

扩展资源

Eating Etiquette in China

1. Don't start eating until the host gives a sign to start.

2. When the dishes are served, you need to wait for the elders, leaders, and guests to try the dishes first.

3. Try to choose dishes that are close to you, and don't flip the dishes back and forth. If someone else is serving the food, don't put your hand over that person's hand to pick up food.

4. You should not rotate the Lazy Susan for yourself when someone else on the table is serving himself from the main bowl. It is recommended to wait until he gets a sufficient quantity of the dish.

5. Wait until the dish takes a complete round when you want to have something a second time so that everyone gets his due share.

6. Never fill your plate to the maximum, and always serve yourself with a small quantity. Rotating the Lazy Susan counterclockwise is yet another bad habit that should be avoided.

Etiquette in Using Chopstick

1. Chopsticks should not be inserted into the rice and should be placed flat on the bowl.

2. Don't play with your chopsticks such as using the chopsticks to beating your bowls or wave your chopsticks around in the air.

3. Don't use your chopsticks to flip the food, if you need to do so, try to use a shovel.

4. Pointing at people with your chopsticks is considered to be very impolite. Try to avoid so. If you accidentally do so, you must apologize in time.

5. Try to hold your chopsticks and avoid them falling to the ground.

以上文字摘选自ChinaTravel网站

https://www.chinatravel.com/chinese-food/table-manner

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